Here is where I ended up, I ran out of time.
I may come back to finish it later.
I’m still working on softer and lighter lines. Here’s a quote from the textbook, Lessons in Classical Drawing, by Juliette Aristides that says it all:
“One of the most immediate things beginners can do to improve their work is to draw lightly. When a student gets too dark right away, it creates an emphatic statement, essentially saying, “I know I am right.” This presumption is bad for the work. An artist who starts off too dark and specific in their work will find their drawing finished long before they intended and not know how to go back. Furthermore, it is often difficult to erase heavy beginning lines.”